As do I like the first one most often I find a series of tracks that are composed in a unusuall way. I must say though this is still a great series of tracks you have put together. I really like the solo in this, and also the one sound in here reminded me of sonic a bit so definite plus. Since I do like these for a suggestion maybe just speed up the tempo of this a bit. I think the faster pace will accent the rest of the song for the listeners.
Thanks! I know the sound you're talking about that reminds of you sonic, i heard it and thought it would fit nicely and it did :D
The tempo is the same as the others (160bpm), just appears slower because of the structure of the hihats, handclaps, etc. I will try to speed it up a tad more and see how it goes.
Thanks for the feedback again!
- BeefourMusic -
I was listening to this and getting down to the track. Everything was great with nice flow and power to it over all a very well made track. But if I might suggest its sounds a little to bouncy maybe its a phaser for the guitar thats doing that and its a little bit distorted due to the bouncieness of the effect on that particular instrument. Hey though still a great track look forward to more of your work.
We didn't use a phaser in this song but maybe it's cause we use the distortion effect twice on the guitar.
Maybe that's what you hear :)
Anyways thanks for listening and thanks for that review!
I know it says trance
Even though it says trance, I honestly thing this would make a great dup step piece. The construction base of this piece actually really flows nice. If I can possible suggest almost more of a upbeat bass added to this and maybe a tad sound adjust ment on the noise level to make the overall volume have a little more impact. Thats all I can actually suggest cause I know you said , that you was trying out different instruments. And if you could I also need constructive criticsm on one of my works I just submitted Its callec AS Hearts beat it should still be on the main audio flash portal page. I would greatly aprecciate it. I really do like this.
thanks for the feedback. although i'm really pissed at my pc becasue i had a little problem and the file was somehow deleted >:C so I started from scratch and made a new dubstep track :D
long time no talk man
I know its been awhile its soldiersword man. hope your doing well I see your still putting out new music and it still sounds great hopefully some time soon I will be up and running again. I moved states again so hopefully some time when I am out that way i can drop by and say hi man. and keep streaming that dragon quest lol.
Oh shit man, what's up yeah i got my own place now dude i'll send you a PM with the link if you'd like dude :P good to see you're still alive too, heh
sorry for you loss
I recently just lost 4 of my best of friend to a car crash so i feel the emotion of your words strait to the heart. i am glad to hear you remember who for who she was and not as she is now. she will always be with you in your heart and mind. great music and i am looking forward to more
its great and you are a great poem writer yourself
To wander the heavens and the hells
Forever lost in a sea of your own repentance
Wanders of hope in the distance
Shall light return to this barren plain
To only look forward
To forget haunting memories
The world inside a mind contimplating
A true injustice of a misunderstanding.
The fight is only half the battle of love
A war in the midst of the tranquility
Consequence of love's hate
The closet you have ever been
Yet no longer together.
Fade out of time an remember
Times of a better day
Where you love existed
Even if only for a short lived time.
tanks a lot
i like the poem is fantastic
keep it up
even though the it say bass and drums they are a little over powering . maybe just tune them down a little bit so you can also hear the background a little more also. well hey its just my opinion. if its not to much to ask can you stop by my page and give me some feedback on some of my work i need the critics they help immensely . any how i am looking forward to hearing more of your work
even though like you said it was a little long in the begining it was good it felt like it built up suspence right in the begining to allow the rest of this to flow nicely. and if its not to much to ask do you think you could stop by my page and listen to some of my work. i am attemping something new and the feed back helps and anyhow i am looking forward to hearing more of your work
it really follows along with the story line of that game and its well put together. and if its not to much to ask can you stop by and listen to a few of my pieces of work i need the feedback cause i am getting ready to attempt something i have never done before and the critics help . any how looking forward to hearing more of your work
for a mix this is great just a small suggestion the sounds tend to clash in some spots but not really many it seems like some of them are fighting to be on top. but still great work. if you could stop by my page and listen to a few of mine i need help in learning some new techniques cause i want to mix some of my tracks and i do not have a clue how to do. any how good job keep it up looking forward to hearing more of your work to come
Thank you good sir/madam. And I checked out some of your stuff per your request. Thank you for your time and I returned it with some of mine. Thank you :D
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