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[Session Three - B4M!]

As do I like the first one most often I find a series of tracks that are composed in a unusuall way. I must say though this is still a great series of tracks you have put together. I really like the solo in this, and also the one sound in here reminded me of sonic a bit so definite plus. Since I do like these for a suggestion maybe just speed up the tempo of this a bit. I think the faster pace will accent the rest of the song for the listeners.

SUB4RU responds:

Thanks! I know the sound you're talking about that reminds of you sonic, i heard it and thought it would fit nicely and it did :D

The tempo is the same as the others (160bpm), just appears slower because of the structure of the hihats, handclaps, etc. I will try to speed it up a tad more and see how it goes.

Thanks for the feedback again!

- BeefourMusic -

[DrownZ - Outstanding]

I was listening to this and getting down to the track. Everything was great with nice flow and power to it over all a very well made track. But if I might suggest its sounds a little to bouncy maybe its a phaser for the guitar thats doing that and its a little bit distorted due to the bouncieness of the effect on that particular instrument. Hey though still a great track look forward to more of your work.

lhceist41 responds:

We didn't use a phaser in this song but maybe it's cause we use the distortion effect twice on the guitar.
Maybe that's what you hear :)

Anyways thanks for listening and thanks for that review!

[Ihaveamonocle]

I know it says trance

Even though it says trance, I honestly thing this would make a great dup step piece. The construction base of this piece actually really flows nice. If I can possible suggest almost more of a upbeat bass added to this and maybe a tad sound adjust ment on the noise level to make the overall volume have a little more impact. Thats all I can actually suggest cause I know you said , that you was trying out different instruments. And if you could I also need constructive criticsm on one of my works I just submitted Its callec AS Hearts beat it should still be on the main audio flash portal page. I would greatly aprecciate it. I really do like this.

obliviouscrunch responds:

thanks for the feedback. although i'm really pissed at my pc becasue i had a little problem and the file was somehow deleted >:C so I started from scratch and made a new dubstep track :D

[i will miss you (piano)]

its great and you are a great poem writer yourself

To wander the heavens and the hells
Forever lost in a sea of your own repentance
Wanders of hope in the distance
Shall light return to this barren plain

To only look forward
To forget haunting memories
The world inside a mind contimplating
A true injustice of a misunderstanding.

The fight is only half the battle of love
A war in the midst of the tranquility

Apart anew
Consequence of love's hate
The closet you have ever been
Yet no longer together.

Fade out of time an remember
Times of a better day
Where you love existed
Even if only for a short lived time.

RayVanRev responds:

tanks a lot
i like the poem is fantastic
keep it up
peace!!!

RVR

[Happystep (Prex)]

good job

for a mix this is great just a small suggestion the sounds tend to clash in some spots but not really many it seems like some of them are fighting to be on top. but still great work. if you could stop by my page and listen to a few of mine i need help in learning some new techniques cause i want to mix some of my tracks and i do not have a clue how to do. any how good job keep it up looking forward to hearing more of your work to come

PainasaurusRex responds:

Thank you good sir/madam. And I checked out some of your stuff per your request. Thank you for your time and I returned it with some of mine. Thank you :D

[[Z] Scatterfied [Z]]

great work

the suspense really built up and the sound has an impact through the arrangement of the sounds them selves over all it flowed nicely and the beat was astonishing. if its not to much to ask i am looking for people to critc my work and god knows i need it. so i can get better and you seem to be way ahead of my knowledge. any way great job looking forward to hearing more of your work

KI1 responds:

Thanks heaps! Glad to see my work paid off.
I've been waiting a long time for the day I get positive feedback :P
And I'll definitely have a look at your stuff.
Thanks for reviewing ;)

[Our Comet Ride]

great work

small suggestion i do not really know but there is one sound that seems to stand out that dampens the song a little bit but i love how this turned out and am looking forward to hearing more of your work. if it is not too much to ask can you listen to some of mine and let me know what i can improve on cause you are far ahead of me when it comes to music making

MoonlitRaven responds:

thanks man, I'll check your stuf out for sure, I've been making music for 4 years now and I'm 17 so I'm pretty new myself lol.

[ZP || Journey to Nowhere]

great job

the suspense really builds then it hits the main melody and beat which pulls it together in a unique way allowing the listener to get enveloped in the music its self. well if you could check out some of mine. they are no where as good as this but i can try let me know what you think so i can improve myself. any how looking forward to hearing more of your work

ZachPayne responds:

Sure I'll check em out

[UF - Expand Your Vocabularium]

great work

this is a great piece the arrangements flow so fittingly into this great job looking forward to hearing more of your work. stop by check out some of mine sometime let me know what you think be as harsh as you want with mine it helps out alot. well great job and keep it up

Cutting-Christ responds:

Will do! And thanks. :)

[Can't keep it away]

god lol

sounds like and nes game music but its still great

HighBallers responds:

ha thanks for the review brodeo