the animation was great no clipping very smooth with its reations and randomness i hope to see more of your work soon keep it up
This was a very great piece of work and lol how did you know how my relationships ended lol . jk jk. i really did enjoy this piece i can relate to it easily and nice choice on the robots to describe the emotions as war
got to love valentines day
it really is creative its often the most simplest of things that make the greatest impact on a love one so this is completely d'aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
As do I like the first one most often I find a series of tracks that are composed in a unusuall way. I must say though this is still a great series of tracks you have put together. I really like the solo in this, and also the one sound in here reminded me of sonic a bit so definite plus. Since I do like these for a suggestion maybe just speed up the tempo of this a bit. I think the faster pace will accent the rest of the song for the listeners.
Thanks! I know the sound you're talking about that reminds of you sonic, i heard it and thought it would fit nicely and it did :D
The tempo is the same as the others (160bpm), just appears slower because of the structure of the hihats, handclaps, etc. I will try to speed it up a tad more and see how it goes.
Thanks for the feedback again!
- BeefourMusic -
I was listening to this and getting down to the track. Everything was great with nice flow and power to it over all a very well made track. But if I might suggest its sounds a little to bouncy maybe its a phaser for the guitar thats doing that and its a little bit distorted due to the bouncieness of the effect on that particular instrument. Hey though still a great track look forward to more of your work.
We didn't use a phaser in this song but maybe it's cause we use the distortion effect twice on the guitar.
Maybe that's what you hear :)
Anyways thanks for listening and thanks for that review!
I know it says trance
Even though it says trance, I honestly thing this would make a great dup step piece. The construction base of this piece actually really flows nice. If I can possible suggest almost more of a upbeat bass added to this and maybe a tad sound adjust ment on the noise level to make the overall volume have a little more impact. Thats all I can actually suggest cause I know you said , that you was trying out different instruments. And if you could I also need constructive criticsm on one of my works I just submitted Its callec AS Hearts beat it should still be on the main audio flash portal page. I would greatly aprecciate it. I really do like this.
thanks for the feedback. although i'm really pissed at my pc becasue i had a little problem and the file was somehow deleted >:C so I started from scratch and made a new dubstep track :D
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